Grammar Bootcamp

November 16, 2016 | Leave a Comment

I think Ms. Fleetwood’s idea of a grammar bootcamp was great. Honestly, i’m not very good at grammar myself and I found many of these videos particularly useful, including the worksheets as well. Some videos such as the Formatting Titles video were useful, because in my essays I would always be confused whether I should […]

Professor Fleetwood’s long awaited grammar boot camp is finally here! Although I sound very excited, it was not really all that much fun. However, it truly was informative. The first couple of videos spoke about sentence structure and their occasional need for commas and other punctuation. I enjoyed the videos a lot because they were […]

Revision

November 13, 2016 | Leave a Comment

Sorry for the late blog post I was absent on Monday so I had no choice but to delay this post. For my paper I thought that providing my argument first then introducing my source separately would be an efficient way to introduce my thesis. However, looking back at what we did in class, when […]

Revision Process

November 10, 2016 | Leave a Comment

The revision process was really  help to me. The second paper we were used The Absolutely True Diary of Part-Time Indian. When we do the revision process. I was found a lot of mistakes in my paper. Such as the grammar, translation, and analysis. In paper I should write more quote to let my thesis clear. […]

Revision on Project #2

November 9, 2016 | 2 Comments

I personally feel that working in workshops like we had on Monday and getting feedback really helps make the revision process much easier because we can work on specific areas that we need to improve on. After reading the comments that Professor Fleetwood and my peers have written on my paper, I’ve realized that I […]

The revision process was smooth for me because I knew exactly what to fix. The comments from peer review and Professor Fleetwood’s comments were very true. I realized that I go straight ahead and analyze after giving some background information. Adding the “so what” elements makes the paper interesting because it wouldn’t be fun if I’m […]

Revision Process

November 9, 2016 | Leave a Comment

While re-reading the project 2 essay about The absolutely true diary of part-time Indian job, I found some mistakes that I made in, such as the translation and lack of analyzing. I failed to organize the essay well by moving from one idea to another too quickly because I had so many ideas for each paragraph. The […]

Revisions On My Paper

November 8, 2016 | 1 Comment

I feel that workshops in general and the one that we had on Monday was helpful to improve our essay. My thesis for the second paper is even though Sherman Alexie and Harley Quinn are mentioned in dark novels, they can persuade readers to acknowledge their own identity and to deal with pain and poverty. […]

Project 3

November 8, 2016 | 1 Comment

In my project 3, I wan to introduce some China History. In ancient China, there have a female emperor. She is the only one female emperor in the ancient China history. Her name is Wu, Zetian. In her life, she was have two marriages. She was married Tang dynasty emperor. When Tang dynasty emperor dead, […]

Hey guys, hope you guys all did your drafts, otherwise: that would suck. Anyways, I used the Watchmen graphic novel as my primary source for this paper. When reading this, I noticed the key difference between Watchmen and most comics is the violence. Although all comics contain some sort of violence (hence their relation to the […]

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